http://www.thinkingandmaking.com/person/31172 Thu, 09 Jul 2009 20:34:57 GMT Comments by Loren B <p>If everyone on the web wrote this way, I&#8217;d certainly read more of it. Thanks!</p> <p>&#8220;On Writing Well&#8221; by William Zinsser goes into much more depth on a lot of this. He also recommends reading your work out loud to gain fresh perspective.</p> http://www.thinkingandmaking.com/view/more-tips-for#content_39422 http://www.thinkingandmaking.com/view/more-tips-for#content_39422 Thu, 09 Jul 2009 20:34:57 GMT Loren B